Saturday, 8 October 2011

Storyline

A couple aged between 22 and 24 are married and live in their own house together, they have their first child that was a girl, unfortunatly thier daughter died when she was only five months old. The death of her first child make the mother turn into a psychopath due to the stress and grief the death has caused her.

Therefore, by using the fathers help the mother kidnaps a 11-year old girl and makes her live under the staircase so she cannot escape. The mother does this as she thinnks that the 11 year old girl might be her daughter.

A seven year gap is shown in the film as now the girl they kidnapped is 18 years old and the girl they kidnapped realises there is a ghost in the house. This ghost turns is the couple first child who would now be seven years old.

The ghost is evil because it does not like another girl living in her house and feels as though the 18 year old girl is taking her place. One day, the parents go to work while the girl is threatened to stay at home. The door of the house is left home, so the girl sees this as an escape route becuase the ghost wants to kill her and she can't stay under the stairs forever however, as she decides to escape she ends up bumping into the mother on the way.

The girl tells the father there is a ghost in the house. Towards the end of the film the ghost is detected and the mother realises the actions she took were wrong.

New Storyline

A couple living together in their late 20s have just had a baby girl however, the father already has a 12 year old daughter. After the child birth the mother gets post natal depression. As the baby keeps crying the mother gets stressed and kills the baby. After killing the baby the mother becomes a psychopath and the father thinks the death of the baby is down to a cot death.

Unknowingly the mother acts strangely and does scary things around the house that she is not aware of she is a psychopath, this convinces the daughter and father that there is a ghost in the house. The daughter sees the mother doing something strange in the kitchen through the key hole. In the shot the mother stares back at the girl (looks evil). Many different scenes can be shown to show that there is something wrong with the mother/house.

At the end the mother tires to attack the daughter however the father comes and tries to stop her, as she pushes him out the way he finds it hard to stop her so he hits her on the head and she does (this was not deliberate). The father and daughter move house and live together.

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